- This juvenile is fooling no-one.
这条年轻的迷彩鲷骗不到任何鱼 - Perhaps faking his death will be more believable.
也许假装猝死会更可信 - Blown it.
搞砸了 - A more subtle performance will be needed.
演技还需进一步打磨 - This is more convincing.
这次更逼真了 - But his aim must be better than that.
但显然还需要继续提高 - Nearly.
就差一点